Hmm..

For the most part, this is pretty good! But man, if you were making this for a girlfriend, it NEEDS too be softer, and a bit more sweet. Because with the hard bass and all, it doesn't really sound like a love song. The wind effect was pretty cool, but REALLY loud. When you used the hihat presets, I thought you were gonna use the kick preset, but I was wrong! Great song dude, keep it up. Go check out my latest!

Dj-Snow